Good: You maintain an aura of innocence about the progression throughout the entire thing. I like the transformation noise. Good expressions. Poses (like the one where the girl on the right places her hand on her friend's head). Good use of the clothing proportion. However, I'd imagine her shirt would sit lower on her torso once the blonde had regressed that far.
Bad: The background is extremely simple. The transition to the "We've got to find you some clothes, quick." picture looks awkward; it just jumps. It's not entirely clear to me how many stages of regression the blonde goes through. Would benefit from more shading.
Well first I was the one who cimmissioned it, second I poat all my commissions in my gallery, and third more advertisment because some people who watch me my not be watching jackuria and this lets them know of him if they want to watch and,or commission him